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Something More (Ferriswheelshipping)-- Ch1 Pg16

Reaper145

Published: Jul 23, 2013

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Cover Page (and plot summary)

This comic is read from right-to-left

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MY GOODNESS. It's been forever. DA's submission page looks different! I actually scheduled this to post at a certain time. I can't believe it's been so long since I updated. My bad. I want to be here for this comic again, I honestly still love it. I didn't neglect it for other art. I just neglected art entirely this year...

PSA: NO FURTHER PAGES WILL BE COLORED.
I apologize. I'm going to tone the rest of the pages. Please understand, it takes me so many hours to color a page like this. I've been working on this for way longer than I care to admit. I lose motivation because of how draining the constant coloring is. Besides, tone is nice, right?! It looks more authentic.

This page is confusing, I think. There's supposed to have been time passing in between the last 2 panels. It went from lunch to the end of the day, when they are heading home. I need to work on transitions.

Anyway, thank you for waiting and I hope you're not TOO disappointed.

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2000x3000px 3.5 MB

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mdhiaid

Jul 30, 2013

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This doujinshi or comic or whatever you call it, is amazing. It has a really funny opening and me and my sister were laughing on the floor just by looking at the first few drawings you had drawn. The pictures are very detailed and the coloring is great. You did a very accurate piece pertaining to the personality of the characters and their overall appearance. Plus, I have been telling people for months that chess shipping is wrong because I see White and Black as being brother and sister too. they fight just like brother and sister and look awfully similar too, plus, they never meet each other in the game!! How can they fall in love if they never meet?! I'm glad that you made them high school characters, because if they were ten that would be really weird. Thank you for making such a wonderful piece that has got me hooked on my laptop night and day waiting for more. Literally, my mom has to come into my room at 3:45 am and yell at me to go to sleep! You know where I'll be for the next few weeks! You earned yourself a new watcher, and maybe a lama badge!